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2:11, did nobody else here "not even a par carked anywhere" or am I just crazy? Комментарий от : @SpoonfullofSandrock |
The police are criminals they have drug dealers😂 Комментарий от : @pspa5502 |
But who the hell made the phone calls!!! Комментарий от : @rachelrothrock1914 |
Love this dudes voice Комментарий от : @dennisfinan7977 |
Wow man your mind thank you❤❤❤im from Trinidad and Tobago Комментарий от : @MoniqueOliver-dk5cj |
So many plot twist😭 Комментарий от : @dejaperchez4221 |
Why havnt anyone made this into a movie yet??!!! And it should end with a phonecall to her with no phonenumber and a quiet whisper saying "thankyou..." The end... Комментарий от : @LeClairBHZ |
Acab Комментарий от : @Shoelace420 |
She would've gotten away with it too if it weren't for that meddling Barkley Комментарий от : @nitewing1898 |
This was amazing. I need more like this Комментарий от : @kingtiger7372 |
2:10 a par carked? 😂 Комментарий от : @lewiskerr7956 |
4:20 Комментарий от : @DudeGigante |
2:10 😂😂 Комментарий от : @ticktock4996 |
Where is the last part ? 😮 Комментарий от : @niamhmurphy1270 |
There’s no way this is real, it has to be fake, unsubbed Комментарий от : @Kieran.Rob53 |
I thought the cat was the clairvoyant girl who was murdered Also I thought her fear of watching her shower was possibly foreseeing her death in a final scene with the mole , not the secretary but another cop, in a flooded basement Great story loved the main character Комментарий от : @user-dc9ri5ty8h |
47:28 Yep that’s how getting a cat works. Комментарий от : @danydazed4314 |
This was a terrific story, a great mystery with paranormal overtones. Frankly it would make a terrific movie! Not surprising to find this kind of corruption in a small town. The US marshals should definitely hire this cop---she is obviously too good for this cow town dept. There is a real glitch at the end though, a few sentences are cut off. Nothing substantial, just the cop going back to her aunt's house. But the need to re-record the part at the end, to include the actual ending of the story. Otherwise the "ending" of the recorded story seems very abrupt and not very satisfying. As for Barclay herself? She definitely needs to call that marshal back. Maybe she should ask her Aunt Maggie if she can move in with here, and become part of the police force in that town, because it is obvious that she is not appreciated where she is. Also, it is a bad, bad thing for any cop to use booze as a relief from stress. That is nothing but a dead end. For that matter, even with the ending, it leaves things out. No, the mystery is solved, the killers are in custody, etc. But at the end of the story, nobody mentions the 911 calls that led to the unravelling of the entire chain of events. It seems to me that the cop should have had thoughts, even if she kept them to herself, about who was responsible for the calls. Physical phone calls seem a bit too reality based to be from the ghost of the murdered woman, but was there someone else who might have suspected something and wanted to start an investigation? My money is on Rose, the grandmother of the murdered woman. After all it was her phone lines that had been tampered with. Or someone else? Maybe the phone company tech or one of his co-workers? Maybe someone else who was being paid off by the gun runner. But someone, alive or dead, kept leading Barclay back out to that deserted house, hoping and succeeding in getting her attention. All of the spooky things could have been pulled off by a living human. Maybe someone who suspected what had happened, but was afraid to get involved directly? Or wanted to avoid admitting their own guilt in helping the gun runner? Or was it really supernatural? This was more like an audiobook than just a short story. It started as a ghost story then turned into a prime mystery and conspiracy. But the ending was a bit soft, and left some loose ends dangling. Комментарий от : @michelelyons9410 |
I absolutely LOVED THIS! Thank u! Комментарий от : @sm2544 |
he said par carked hahaha ha Комментарий от : @DeltaEngine |
Not even a par carked anywhere 🤣 Комментарий от : @austinwayda94 |
OOKMG!! That was such an amazing story... I frickin' love this channel!!! LOL Комментарий от : @TheShaylashay |
why did the story end abruptly Комментарий от : @damage6470 |
Am I crazy or does the Lateran when you turn your phone brightness to zero it looks like a face with there eyes closers Комментарий от : @Russainbread |
great story…i thought Pete was going to be the mole. lol Комментарий от : @bravomike1021 |
2:10 par carked😂😂 Комментарий от : @benjaminbarlow7756 |
My favorite part so far is when he says “not even a par carked anywhere” Комментарий от : @officialhaxforeverx |
2:10 “Not even a Par Carked” Комментарий от : @redthecrusadertiktok |
Par Carked 😂😂😂😂 Комментарий от : @user-zl9nh9zb1l |
3:40 like in ahs season one lol Комментарий от : @Iammeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
Wheres the rest of the story😢 Комментарий от : @prettyboii774 |
Pa? That’s quite the accent. 😂 Комментарий от : @nicoletorres6940 |
Be.busta > mr.nightmare Комментарий от : @lizbethquin9259 |
Not at all what I was looking for but exactly what I didn't know I wanted loved it Комментарий от : @PhillipThomas-lp1cg |
Did that cat change its name hailey to holly? And when she took off from work did sh4 forget her friend was coming? She just left for her aunts place Комментарий от : @ilaria298 |
Sneaky linkin it and deletin it 😭😭 Комментарий от : @dove.9833 |
I love the fakness. "I went n checked for a box the next day it opened with eese." Just contaminating the crime scene a second time Комментарий от : @turdfurg47 |
"2pm or as I interpreted it 0200 hours" good thing your not military that's 2am you mean 1400 hours Комментарий от : @turdfurg47 |
Great story. Enjoyed it very much. Комментарий от : @lauras2046 |
interesting story I knew a Michelle Klein....interesting Комментарий от : @tomhellert4125 |
I fell asleep with YouTube playing and throughout about an hour I was having very interesting disturbing dreams, I was basically projecting what I was hearing subconsciously. Very cool good story Комментарий от : @coziecrocc |
Lame! Waste of time. But thanks I know not to ever try anything you write again. Комментарий от : @KookooKal-fz2fz |
58:18 Комментарий от : @cwrwn928 |
Are these shitty stories narrated by a chimney sweeper? Комментарий от : @seanmc7727 |
I would just like to throw out a big thank you to the folks who did the music it was spot on. louder when it was appropriate and quieter during the speaking parts ... so often it's opposites and so loud you can't even hear the narrator ... thank you so much ... Great job everybody it was wonderful . Комментарий от : @creativetamara1326 |
NOTHING BETTER HAPPEN TO HALEY Комментарий от : @obondostudios9482 |
Omg I just found this and now I am #obsessed 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻 Комментарий от : @poppyandben9679 |
I love this book Комментарий от : @Leah_lovesyall30 |
I wish I could hear the end of the story 😢 Комментарий от : @jeanettedebeaumont2758 |
I love it 2 mins in. " Not even a par carked anywhere". I love that line so much Комментарий от : @man_in_red |
Quite a story, I really enjoyed it... Комментарий от : @plushcat716 |
That police chief is a dick. Комментарий от : @radsputiogramen8609 |
Bro said “par carked” instead of “car parked anywhere” at 2:10-2:13 😂 anyone else hear it? Комментарий от : @teaganplayz6735 |
Par carked😂🤣 Комментарий от : @codylewallen3989 |
There wasn't even a "par carked" anywhere. Nice. Комментарий от : @kevinmeserole7345 |
The ppl calling the dark skinned girl an ahole for playing a prank on a racist r clearly yt and projecting. She handled the situation much better than the parent had deserved. Racism is hurtful and very harmful, and ppl who refuse to admit its real in even the smallest form r complicit. Комментарий от : @AD-id9cp |
Oh, heck yes. I missed these. Комментарий от : @luvondarox |
Why so many fake stories? Комментарий от : @robert2695 |
Wait who made the calls!! Where the rest Комментарий от : @truenation9890 |
Not to mention, he creates videos in other countries which don’t support what Chris is doing so it’ll lose views for that as well Комментарий от : @tumbooo |
Really enjoyed this story. I work graveyard shift, and this was perfect story to get me thru my shift.. Комментарий от : @michelleserrano6115 |
Someone needs to add more to this story Комментарий от : @Indeed_128 |
Hey! Is this a book? This needs to be made into a movie. Love this. Bestest 🤩 Комментарий от : @shantenafreeman8908 |
Damn i really wanted to know if the gurl went to see her great grandma Комментарий от : @lokiwolfgirl1855 |
Absolutely brilliant 💯 xx Комментарий от : @marieohanlon8871 |
Too bad this audio ends before the end of the story😢. Can't afford to pay to hear what happens after Barkley throws two bottles of wine in a bag (to return to Aunt's house?). At least the station mole was revealed before the audio abruptly ends. Wish you would have said partial story before I was invested. Комментарий от : @cherylerose9368 |
Holy cow this was absolutely amazing. I didn’t want it to end. 🤓 Комментарий от : @TheNewMailLady |
Jango fett has a scary story podcast? Комментарий от : @chrisaizen3678 |
First story don't go without backup!!! Комментарий от : @porkbeans4792 |
Just listened to the whole story. So good! But who made the 911 calls?????? Listening to the end. Did I miss something?? Комментарий от : @fionalogan4487 |
Is no one going to answer the biggest question that was never answered? Why did they call Betty Ann "Beatbox"? Was she like an underground rapper or something? And what kind of lazy ass nickname of a nickname is "Beat"? Комментарий от : @JD-H8067 |
Phenomenal had me hooked the whole time Комментарий от : @Ck03136 |
Hailey the cat became Hollie the cat somewhere in the idle part. but this has to be a story that kept you on the edge of the seat. Loved every bit of it. Kudos to whoever wrote it. Defo if they make a movie then it would be a great one Комментарий от : @sunchavox |
Good one!! Комментарий от : @ruthrecord6430 |
The beginning of this is a great way to trigger a schizophrenic Комментарий от : @bando3148 |
Great stories, nice to have a Sarah who's not a B. Lol cheers to the author, and thanks to be. Busta for the great narration! Комментарий от : @moodycrab77 |
Dude I can barely hear you Комментарий от : @bigrubtocool4904 |
Thanks Sir Комментарий от : @mrkasjan5183 |
❤❤❤❤❤ 0:19 Комментарий от : @mrkasjan5183 |
Around 1:52:43 you called the cat Haley “holly” haha 😅 Комментарий от : @Htsht-xg3cr |
I don't like it when they use the f bomb Комментарий от : @rebeccamoore9759 |
I listened to it twice. I loved it. Комментарий от : @lidamansouri8047 |
"And not even a par carked anywhere" all he wanted was some chish and fips, he was also being followed by those damn cheeve slewers he met at school. Комментарий от : @alisonbarnard5328 |
Omg this woman started becoming very annoying when she got mad at her dad over being with Michelle. I was thinking she truly exaggerated the point about her poor dad. If her dad didn't tell her everything then there was a reason. It just came across as her sounding like a spoilt arrogant child. I know this is fiction but I became very engrossed in this story so when s**t hit the fan I was spinning out. Комментарий от : @Izatin97 |
nice video. first one I have seen and wanted to subscribe. the thing is it was kinda difficult. there is a fake subscribe button that shows up on mobile only in fullscreen landscape mode. I hit sub and by chance noticed I wasn't really subbed when I checked the comments. You may be losing out on a lot of subs because of this Комментарий от : @Bryan-cj5ox |
🤒 Комментарий от : @codedlAnguage |
Man, this was painful to try to listen to. The story was terrible, and the narration was even worse. I hope this channel doesn't show up in my feed again. Комментарий от : @Nightmare45-70 |
Great story! But for the first part did anyone else notice that he said “par carked” instead of “car parked”? Or does my brain notice things easier than others? Whatever the story is still cool :) Комментарий от : @axelotl9812 |
I don’t usually listen to Creepy Pastas. But I really enjoyed this one. It got me from the start! Комментарий от : @donnafayeharris7170 |
Great story telling! Комментарий от : @franksmith4651 |
That's crazy how the police keep getting false reports and phone calls about the same address.. that was a good story Комментарий от : @willjoseph-hr3ke |
Please for the love of God don't tell me that's it! I mean yeah sure, I could just go and read the story myself, but then I wouldn't have a smooth voice Australian narrating everything. Комментарий от : @morningstar9849 |
😊😊😊 Комментарий от : @lynnkurtz3310 |
She just left he aunt in the closet lmao Комментарий от : @markypoo5152 |
I dont care if this was real or fake, this was an amazing story to follow, if it is fake, props to whoever wrote this, kinda sounds like it could be a tv series if it isnt already lol Комментарий от : @BloodBullet0125 |
This story was 2 hours but felt like 30 mins I want more Комментарий от : @nickginter5854 |
This needs to be a movie omg so good ! Комментарий от : @victoriarosales6287 |
Twerk Комментарий от : @joseflores-vk7gh |
What a great emaple of police not doing their job. Idc what the lock looks like. YOU OPEN ALL DOORS!! Комментарий от : @emilywelch6060 |