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@SpoonfullofSandrock
2:11, did nobody else here "not even a par carked anywhere" or am I just crazy?
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@pspa5502
The police are criminals they have drug dealers😂
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@rachelrothrock1914
But who the hell made the phone calls!!!
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@dennisfinan7977
Love this dudes voice
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@MoniqueOliver-dk5cj
Wow man your mind thank you❤❤❤im from Trinidad and Tobago
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@dejaperchez4221
So many plot twist😭
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@LeClairBHZ
Why havnt anyone made this into a movie yet??!!!
And it should end with a phonecall to her with no phonenumber and a quiet whisper saying "thankyou..." The end...

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@Shoelace420
Acab
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@nitewing1898
She would've gotten away with it too if it weren't for that meddling Barkley
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@kingtiger7372
This was amazing. I need more like this
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@lewiskerr7956
2:10 a par carked? 😂
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@DudeGigante
4:20
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@ticktock4996
2:10 😂😂
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@niamhmurphy1270
Where is the last part ? 😮
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@Kieran.Rob53
There’s no way this is real, it has to be fake, unsubbed
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@user-dc9ri5ty8h
I thought the cat was the clairvoyant girl who was murdered
Also I thought her fear of watching her shower was possibly foreseeing her death in a final scene with the mole , not the secretary but another cop, in a flooded basement
Great story loved the main character

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@danydazed4314
47:28 Yep that’s how getting a cat works.
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@michelelyons9410
This was a terrific story, a great mystery with paranormal overtones. Frankly it would make a terrific movie! Not surprising to find this kind of corruption in a small town. The US marshals should definitely hire this cop---she is obviously too good for this cow town dept. There is a real glitch at the end though, a few sentences are cut off. Nothing substantial, just the cop going back to her aunt's house. But the need to re-record the part at the end, to include the actual ending of the story. Otherwise the "ending" of the recorded story seems very abrupt and not very satisfying.

As for Barclay herself? She definitely needs to call that marshal back. Maybe she should ask her Aunt Maggie if she can move in with here, and become part of the police force in that town, because it is obvious that she is not appreciated where she is. Also, it is a bad, bad thing for any cop to use booze as a relief from stress. That is nothing but a dead end.

For that matter, even with the ending, it leaves things out. No, the mystery is solved, the killers are in custody, etc. But at the end of the story, nobody mentions the 911 calls that led to the unravelling of the entire chain of events. It seems to me that the cop should have had thoughts, even if she kept them to herself, about who was responsible for the calls. Physical phone calls seem a bit too reality based to be from the ghost of the murdered woman, but was there someone else who might have suspected something and wanted to start an investigation? My money is on Rose, the grandmother of the murdered woman. After all it was her phone lines that had been tampered with. Or someone else? Maybe the phone company tech or one of his co-workers? Maybe someone else who was being paid off by the gun runner. But someone, alive or dead, kept leading Barclay back out to that deserted house, hoping and succeeding in getting her attention. All of the spooky things could have been pulled off by a living human. Maybe someone who suspected what had happened, but was afraid to get involved directly? Or wanted to avoid admitting their own guilt in helping the gun runner? Or was it really supernatural?

This was more like an audiobook than just a short story. It started as a ghost story then turned into a prime mystery and conspiracy. But the ending was a bit soft, and left some loose ends dangling.

Комментарий от : @michelelyons9410


@sm2544
I absolutely LOVED THIS! Thank u!
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@DeltaEngine
he said par carked hahaha ha
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@austinwayda94
Not even a par carked anywhere 🤣
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@TheShaylashay
OOKMG!! That was such an amazing story... I frickin' love this channel!!! LOL
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@damage6470
why did the story end abruptly
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@Russainbread
Am I crazy or does the Lateran when you turn your phone brightness to zero it looks like a face with there eyes closers
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@bravomike1021
great story…i thought Pete was going to be the mole. lol
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@benjaminbarlow7756
2:10 par carked😂😂
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@officialhaxforeverx
My favorite part so far is when he says “not even a par carked anywhere”
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@redthecrusadertiktok
2:10 “Not even a Par Carked”
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@user-zl9nh9zb1l
Par Carked 😂😂😂😂
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@Iammeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
3:40 like in ahs season one lol
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@prettyboii774
Wheres the rest of the story😢
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@nicoletorres6940
Pa? That’s quite the accent. 😂
Комментарий от : @nicoletorres6940


@lizbethquin9259
Be.busta > mr.nightmare
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@PhillipThomas-lp1cg
Not at all what I was looking for but exactly what I didn't know I wanted loved it
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@ilaria298
Did that cat change its name hailey to holly? And when she took off from work did sh4 forget her friend was coming? She just left for her aunts place
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@dove.9833
Sneaky linkin it and deletin it 😭😭
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@turdfurg47
I love the fakness. "I went n checked for a box the next day it opened with eese." Just contaminating the crime scene a second time
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@turdfurg47
"2pm or as I interpreted it 0200 hours" good thing your not military that's 2am you mean 1400 hours
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@lauras2046
Great story. Enjoyed it very much.
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@tomhellert4125
interesting story I knew a Michelle Klein....interesting
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@coziecrocc
I fell asleep with YouTube playing and throughout about an hour I was having very interesting disturbing dreams, I was basically projecting what I was hearing subconsciously. Very cool good story
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@KookooKal-fz2fz
Lame! Waste of time. But thanks I know not to ever try anything you write again.
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@cwrwn928
58:18
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@seanmc7727
Are these shitty stories narrated by a chimney sweeper?
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@creativetamara1326
I would just like to throw out a big thank you to the folks who did the music it was spot on. louder when it was appropriate and quieter during the speaking parts ... so often it's opposites and so loud you can't even hear the narrator ... thank you so much ... Great job everybody it was wonderful .
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@obondostudios9482
NOTHING BETTER HAPPEN TO HALEY
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@poppyandben9679
Omg I just found this and now I am #obsessed 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻
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@Leah_lovesyall30
I love this book
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@jeanettedebeaumont2758
I wish I could hear the end of the story 😢
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@man_in_red
I love it 2 mins in. " Not even a par carked anywhere". I love that line so much
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@plushcat716
Quite a story, I really enjoyed it...
Комментарий от : @plushcat716


@radsputiogramen8609
That police chief is a dick.
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@teaganplayz6735
Bro said “par carked” instead of “car parked anywhere” at 2:10-2:13 😂 anyone else hear it?
Комментарий от : @teaganplayz6735


@codylewallen3989
Par carked😂🤣
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@kevinmeserole7345
There wasn't even a "par carked" anywhere. Nice.
Комментарий от : @kevinmeserole7345


@AD-id9cp
The ppl calling the dark skinned girl an ahole for playing a prank on a racist r clearly yt and projecting. She handled the situation much better than the parent had deserved. Racism is hurtful and very harmful, and ppl who refuse to admit its real in even the smallest form r complicit.
Комментарий от : @AD-id9cp


@luvondarox
Oh, heck yes. I missed these.
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@robert2695
Why so many fake stories?
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@truenation9890
Wait who made the calls!! Where the rest
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@tumbooo
Not to mention, he creates videos in other countries which don’t support what Chris is doing so it’ll lose views for that as well
Комментарий от : @tumbooo


@michelleserrano6115
Really enjoyed this story. I work graveyard shift, and this was perfect story to get me thru my shift..
Комментарий от : @michelleserrano6115


@Indeed_128
Someone needs to add more to this story
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@shantenafreeman8908
Hey! Is this a book? This needs to be made into a movie. Love this. Bestest 🤩
Комментарий от : @shantenafreeman8908


@lokiwolfgirl1855
Damn i really wanted to know if the gurl went to see her great grandma
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@marieohanlon8871
Absolutely brilliant 💯 xx
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@cherylerose9368
Too bad this audio ends before the end of the story😢. Can't afford to pay to hear what happens after Barkley throws two bottles of wine in a bag (to return to Aunt's house?). At least the station mole was revealed before the audio abruptly ends. Wish you would have said partial story before I was invested.
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@TheNewMailLady
Holy cow this was absolutely amazing. I didn’t want it to end. 🤓
Комментарий от : @TheNewMailLady


@chrisaizen3678
Jango fett has a scary story podcast?
Комментарий от : @chrisaizen3678


@porkbeans4792
First story don't go without backup!!!
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@fionalogan4487
Just listened to the whole story. So good!
But who made the 911 calls??????
Listening to the end. Did I miss something??

Комментарий от : @fionalogan4487


@JD-H8067
Is no one going to answer the biggest question that was never answered? Why did they call Betty Ann "Beatbox"? Was she like an underground rapper or something? And what kind of lazy ass nickname of a nickname is "Beat"?
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@Ck03136
Phenomenal had me hooked the whole time
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@sunchavox
Hailey the cat became Hollie the cat somewhere in the idle part. but this has to be a story that kept you on the edge of the seat. Loved every bit of it. Kudos to whoever wrote it. Defo if they make a movie then it would be a great one
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@ruthrecord6430
Good one!!
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@bando3148
The beginning of this is a great way to trigger a schizophrenic
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@moodycrab77
Great stories, nice to have a Sarah who's not a B. Lol cheers to the author, and thanks to be. Busta for the great narration!
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@bigrubtocool4904
Dude I can barely hear you
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@mrkasjan5183
Thanks Sir
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@mrkasjan5183
❤❤❤❤❤ 0:19
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@Htsht-xg3cr
Around 1:52:43 you called the cat Haley “holly” haha 😅
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@rebeccamoore9759
I don't like it when they use the f bomb
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@lidamansouri8047
I listened to it twice. I loved it.
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@alisonbarnard5328
"And not even a par carked anywhere" all he wanted was some chish and fips, he was also being followed by those damn cheeve slewers he met at school.
Комментарий от : @alisonbarnard5328


@Izatin97
Omg this woman started becoming very annoying when she got mad at her dad over being with Michelle. I was thinking she truly exaggerated the point about her poor dad. If her dad didn't tell her everything then there was a reason. It just came across as her sounding like a spoilt arrogant child.
I know this is fiction but I became very engrossed in this story so when s**t hit the fan I was spinning out.

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@Bryan-cj5ox
nice video. first one I have seen and wanted to subscribe. the thing is it was kinda difficult. there is a fake subscribe button that shows up on mobile only in fullscreen landscape mode. I hit sub and by chance noticed I wasn't really subbed when I checked the comments. You may be losing out on a lot of subs because of this
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@codedlAnguage
🤒
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@Nightmare45-70
Man, this was painful to try to listen to. The story was terrible, and the narration was even worse. I hope this channel doesn't show up in my feed again.
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@axelotl9812
Great story!
But for the first part did anyone else notice that he said “par carked” instead of “car parked”?
Or does my brain notice things easier than others?
Whatever the story is still cool :)

Комментарий от : @axelotl9812


@donnafayeharris7170
I don’t usually listen to Creepy Pastas. But I really enjoyed this one. It got me from the start!
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@franksmith4651
Great story telling!
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@willjoseph-hr3ke
That's crazy how the police keep getting false reports and phone calls about the same address.. that was a good story
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@morningstar9849
Please for the love of God don't tell me that's it! I mean yeah sure, I could just go and read the story myself, but then I wouldn't have a smooth voice Australian narrating everything.
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@lynnkurtz3310
😊😊😊
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@markypoo5152
She just left he aunt in the closet lmao
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@BloodBullet0125
I dont care if this was real or fake, this was an amazing story to follow, if it is fake, props to whoever wrote this, kinda sounds like it could be a tv series if it isnt already lol
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@nickginter5854
This story was 2 hours but felt like 30 mins I want more
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@victoriarosales6287
This needs to be a movie omg so good !
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@joseflores-vk7gh
Twerk
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@emilywelch6060
What a great emaple of police not doing their job. Idc what the lock looks like. YOU OPEN ALL DOORS!!
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